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ok so im only 16 but i kinda want your opinion on this show i have been thinking aboutok so basically the show is a criminal investigation but it deal with people with some mental problemsthey could be hallucinating [which is gona be pretty major cause in the show there's going to be mentions of a drug called white claudia] they could have had terrible memories from the pastreligiously delusionalor they are just plain psychotic about 5 characters are going to be shown [first]but the things is all the characters somehow hav something in common [ill get into that in a bit] One of the characters is Karen a female lawyer [blonde about 28] in the story she has no info about her biological mother [raised by foster parents] her father is mentally ill. she is very "liberal" though she keeps to herself about her life especially childhoodnext is Josh, a bar tender [supposedly 29-30 black hair ] sorta goin through financial crisis. sarcastic and kind of a goof ball. he always wished to be a cop yet the family didnt exactly hav that much money ready for him.Alex, a scenes of crime officer [SOCO] who works under his "father-figure" of a boss Richard. he is quiet, keeps his cool but tends to have things go his way. his parents were supposedly dead yet cause of death was unknown. Karen Foster [ i would probably make him 26 years old, light brown hair]Serene, a chemisist [23 dark brown hair] though still a beginner. she is seen as curious a bit uncomfortable at times but has a sweet heart.she is an orphan but she lived a good life as an adopted child.basically in the first episode everyone goes their seperate ways. the episode first starts off with Alex investigating yet another crime scene with a dead body that has same symbol somewhere on the body thats has occured many times now. some now call it the mark of Thanatos [ demon of death]. meanwhile we find Karen in a court room accusing a teacher who is believed to have drugged and molested one of his students. though she won the case she wished it hadnt happened. she comes home takes a bath and looks back at all the sick twisted cases she had solved and has seen how corrupt the world can be. Josh is found on the ground in a bar....his own bar. his friend/partner starts arguing with him about his drinking problem. As Josh leaves the bar, his partner tells him to give up. Josh mutters under his breath "...why dontu just drop dead". Serene is in her university chatting with her friends about how they are just a few months away form graduaing when finally her professor comes in. they start discussing about hte new drug called white claudia and how so many criminal investigations have been related to the usage of this new drug. near the end of the story all 4 characters are kidnapped. first is Alex who comes back to the crime scene when suddenly someone starts laughing hysterically in the background and finally Alex gets knocked out when hit in the head by a dark figure. Karen changes after her shower. once she leaves the room she relizes the apartment door is opened with the mark of Thanatos on the ground when suddently she gets hit in the head with a pipe. Josh comes back to the bar to apologize only to find that his friend was murdered and before he gets to call the police a mysterious figure attacks him. Serene enters her parents house for a visit only to find that they were tied up in the closet when someone covers her head with a long cloth. later on they all meet each other in a cellar wondering who did this to them.during the show there will be refrences about a certain women named Elizabeth. unfortunately her identity is somewhat unknown as her face is almost "covered up in the picture". she may be the reason all the character are all togetherso what do u think?? do u think it would make a good show?what would u name it?P.S. dont name it thanatos cause im planning in making that part of the story for only 1 season [ even though i didnt even start one episode XD]
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