Craft Stickers!

Blog To Find Out More About Paper Bliss

  • 28 December 2010 10:22 am
holidays Blog To Find Out More About Paper Bliss

This Paper Bliss was exactly like they said it was. You won’t regret it. Paper Bliss is awesome.


Another poem...honest opinions please?
Dream a Little DreamPage after pageBlank words read aloudHer visions in lifeMask her like a shroudA slight tap on the paperWith her miraculous penWords flow aboutDeliberately rhyming again A smirk developsOn Paper Bliss her velvety lipsResulting in dimple’sFrom the messages that did slipIf only she knewThat her words enchant allIf only she could seeWhat lies beyond these wallsShe cloaks her emotionsWith her lovely exteriorSoon she discoversThat she’s not so inferiorRevolting against their opinionsShe stands firmly on the groundUnaware of the place she’s headedA new life she is boundJourneying offInto the abyssHer words in a bookBring nothing but sheer blissWhat do you think?
Powered by Yahoo! Answers

holidays Blog To Find Out More About Paper Bliss

4 Comments

  1. Cynthia LY - December 28, 2010 at 12:18 pm

    Ignorance is bliss means: Not knowing is better than knowing and worryinghttp://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/Ignorance+is+bliss

  2. zTeve - December 28, 2010 at 11:40 pm

    it puts up the question mak because we’re supposed to be asking questions

  3. cjvw622 - December 29, 2010 at 11:47 am

    This paper is like splotches of egg thrown at a wall. You have some ideas, but you haven’t got an outline or organized thought. The quote is too long and there are better ones you could have used. Actually, even though the language is old-fashinoned, R&J is an excellent portrayal of adolescent love. Romeo is shallow and immature because he IS young. The part about Rosaline shows how quickly he rises from the depths of despair to passionate love for Juliet, which illustrates adolescent mood swings. You seem to be writing ideas as they come to you rather than deciding on a thesis and organizing an essay around it. You need a main idea.

  4. Kimora Miranda - December 29, 2010 at 11:32 pm

    This is really a nice one. I like it.

Leave a Reply

You must be logged in to post a comment.

Leave A Comment

Spam protection by WP Captcha-Free

Top